So this one from dVerse poets was a prompt of photos from a John McKaveney and picking one to write a poem on about.
They whistle while they work
Original hymns before hymns were made corrupt
Star builders
Whistled songs that float starry eyed unheard but shouted in cosmos void
known
To mothers who taught them
Of the building of skies to be seen in the dark
through eyes dim
earth
so many small
dammed by hymns of fear
But from the scratch of dust and particle cloud
from whence we came you can’t explain how hymns just
take what isn’t theirs
To be seen in scared scarred curious spaces of
hard and soft bits of bangs
big
built from scratch
New stars to be seen
Though long dead
To wonder and fear
In hymns and homily’s
to check
to hold
.
We are star builders and we sing
Original hymns
Nebulas as “starbuilders” whistling “original hymns” — beautifully imagined, expressed.
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Oh thanks so much Dora, didn’t really expect to get any reads on this as I missed the window of the prompt. I’m not a one to just ‘poem’ and even now I see a spot or two that could use some refining but thank you so much for the eye.
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