A Prosery challenge at dVerse poets.
“… a very short piece of prose or flash fiction that tells a story … It can be in any genre of your choice, but it does have a limit of 144 words; an additional challenge is to hit 144 exactly. The special thing about Prosery is that we give you a complete line or two from a poem, which must be included somewhere in your story”
The line or two in this case?
“Something told the wild geese It was time to fly”
From Rachel Lyman Field and her “Something told the Wild Geese”
So to a little bit of fun then was my first thought, don’t know why, just was, a conversation.
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Marge & Henry Geese
“Marge, can ya high tail it please, gotta fly”
“Hold on Henry, where are the kids?”
“They’re not here, grown and flown Marge, you know that, with little geese of their own”
“You’re gonna make me cry Henry”
“Heck Marge, the only time you DON’T cry is when I DON’T bring up the kids and then you honk at me thinking I’m purposely leaving them out of flight out of mind right before you start to cry”
“But we’re running late, why? Usually we’re right there with our sense of time” Marge flapped a wingpoint towards that sign in the roost Something told the wild geese, it was time to fly
“Things are getting warmer now, gets timing tries off. Now can we go … and leave the Honk Sweet Home sign. Wanna catch up to the kids right?”
“Really?!!! Oh, I’m gonna cry”
Very enjoyable! 😀
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Thank ya Carol!
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You captured the geese couple perfectly… wonder if they would recognize their offspring.
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Thanks Bjorn … and I think Marge would definitely know them!! 🙂
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I thoroughly enjoyed your humour in this Marge and Henry conversation, Stephen! You really captured their goosey characters.
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Goosey characters, hehehe, indeed, thanks!!! It was a fun write, thank you for the prompt!!
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A very humorous take on the prompt. Marge is a fantastic character who deserves more stories with her in them.
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Thanks! Just wanted to have a bit of fun with with and definitely could use more of Marge, well in between her crying fits. HeHeHe!!! 🙂
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Funny and tender at the same time! Loved it, Steve — the natural cadence of the dialogue was terribly (hilariously!) well done.
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Why thanks Dora!! I do enjoy writing dialogue. 🙂
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You’re welcome. Dialogue is definitely your forte. 😉
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Thanks!!
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