A new Quadrille poem prompt at dVerse Poets to begin the week.
A 44 word dVerse poem that, this time around, asks to include the word “Bang”.
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These Bangs
Big ones that begat this life
to
smaller ones
softly floating wispy cloth plush petite over imploring eyes that begat beauty
on mountains I sounded song
from peaks
I louded
bangs
until this
another
faded in bangless valley’s whimper
but lingering echo
these bangs

and what’s beneath the bangs is the most important.
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That is true.
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“I louded bangs” Now that is very original phrasing!
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Thank you for picking that out P!
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what a lovely line, this:
on mountains I sounded song
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Oh, thanks so much my friend!!
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You are welcome. Truly a gem.
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