A Petal’s Grace (poem)

A new Quadrille prompt at dVerse Poets this week, this one from Lillian, a 44 word poem, not counting the title, that is to include one word directed in the prompt.

Lillian’s word?

“Petal”

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A Petal’s Grace

Sitting alone outside the Market

he counts people

not known

together with those gone

in slow

hurries

from one stand

one world

to another

a young girl

holding her mother’s hand

pauses and smiles him

a petal

from the rose held under her balloon



8 responses to “A Petal’s Grace (poem)”

  1. That has to have been a wonderful smile.

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    1. Thanks Bjorn, I imagined it to be for an old man in his loneliness.

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  2. A sweet scene you’ve painted here with your words.

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    1. Thanks Lillian. Glad you liked. 🙂

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  3. A story in words, and a painting in words! Both delightful.

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    1. Much appreciated, thank you Rosemary!

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