The Girl With The Basket Of Moon (poem)

Earlier this week at dVerse Poets there was a poetics prompt from Sanaa that offered up a few paintings of John Atkinson Grimshaw to choose from for inspiration.

I thought with this that I’d keep with a bit of a theme that came about with a couple of other responses of mine to recent poetics prompts also with paintings for inspiration.

One from Marc Chagall, to which I responded with “The Girl at the Fair” for his painting “La promenade (The Promenade)” and one from Henri Rousseau and my response of “The Girl with the Umbrella” for his painting La Promenade – “La Promenade dans la Foret (The Walk in the Forest)“.

Here, of the painting choices from Sanaa for John Atkinson Grimshaw, I went with Silver Moonlight (1886)

The Girl with the Basket of Moon

She practiced playful solitude to use at parties

of the well encumbered

to be unencumbered of expectation

with cheeky disdain

carrying it well honed

in her basket

wished

with the scents of

Far East candles,

Damask Roses,

fresh French baguettes in the morning and a winsome yawn,

African violets,

Swiss chocolates

that

dripped lips in the middle

dipped

with liquor that made her flush

blush

at white gloves presented that said

“Why thank you, I’d be delighted to”

under the softest of Moon’s silver

new wet haze

reflecting in warm puddles

along cobblestone thoughts

into her basket

leading her away



5 responses to “The Girl With The Basket Of Moon (poem)”

  1. I love how she carries the moon in her basket, and wishes for stars in her eyes “with cheeky disdain.” The right attitude, I think, when properly worn.

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  2. Stephen, I love the rich imagery.

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  3. Stephen, I love the rich imagery.

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  4. Thanks so much Punam!! Tried to imagine some of her worldly wishes for escape and maybe an invite to a party at the big house.

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