When We (I) Were Writers (poem)

The idea here, from Grace, was to make a try at at a different poetry form, Trolaan.

As per Grace’s prompt:

Trolaan, created by Valerie Peterson Brown, is a poem consisting of 4 quatrains. Each quatrain begins with the same letter. The rhyme scheme is abab for each quatrain.

Starting with the second stanza you use the second letter of the first line of the first stanza to write the second, each line beginning with that letter.

On the third stanza you will use the second letter on the first line of the second stanza and write the third each line beginning with that letter.

On the fourth stanza you will use the second letter on the first line of the third stanza and write the fourth each line beginning with that letter.

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So, I thought back here to my undergraduate days when I, and my friends, envisioned ourselves as writers, poets.

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When We (I) Were Writers

We (I) were words at seeming will

Wrought with grand poetic intent

With a hubris of great writers of skill

Willing envied youth to supplement

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Every piece was poring/pouring soul

Even knowing in my heart to avoid such a thing

Easy it was claim “soul” glorying to all my one unfounded old

Entreating “hearts” then even made me worse for sing

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Vanity of but soul would make readers quake at my depth

Vowing to pen classics worthy of masters

Vacating a notion of things just, just things to be said

Venturing not into words that mattered

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And I came about but in slow, still, revelation

Amid not the soul nor heart’s cliche but the every day

Aweing how sudden old wrought dramatic word made way for just, just simple observation

And that that, that simplest of thought, just might be the true soul say



13 responses to “When We (I) Were Writers (poem)”

  1. Nice one,

    when you get down to the nitty gritty of things, we are always really in the prossess of becoming poets

    much♡love

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    1. Indeed we are Gillena. Love back.

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  2. Sort of like singing the Blues. You can’t do it till you experience it. Well done.

    I love the three thats in one sentence. That, that, that is a first for me! :>)

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    1. Thanks R!! And those three that’s? Truthfully? It wasn’t an intent.

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  3. Nicely done! And I am intrigued by this form, I might have to incorporate it into something I do this week. Thanks for printing out the logistics of the form for me.

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    1. Brand spankin’ to me. Go to Trolaan town V!! I look forward to it.

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  4. I appreciate the earnest process of being one as it is really a journey to write from the heart. This is my favorite part: Every piece was poring/pouring of soul. Thanks for joining in and hope it was a fun challenge as well. Have a good weekend.

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    1. It was indeed a fun challenge Grace, thanks!

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  5. i adored all of this– looking back on your poetic college years and wanting so badly to be a total badass! ahhhh, college. 😉 … my favorite part was def the ending: “the true soul say” … (those 4 words could be their own poem). 🙂

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    1. Too kind Ren and yes, they just could be huh? or maybe the beginning of one.

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