Last Pot Luck (144 word story)

Bjorn at dVerse Poets has a prose challenge this week to write prose of 144 words including the line ‘There’s a lullaby for suffering‘ from Leonard Cohen’s tune “You Want It Darker”.

Last Pot Luck

Maggie brought a faux beef stew, she had an extra provision card she’d nicked, Selina brought chicken though she was saddened by it, Constance brought her last small vegetables thinking why not, Angie brought a State song with altered lyrics as There’s a need’s new lullaby for suffering, Maribel brought small sweet lip smacking things baked in her basement’s hidden basement that were presented on trays like old days, ones with views of the sea or dreamt flowers, Caroline brought pictures from slots in window sills in plain sight, her William was held somewhere because of them but he always said “un-hide them when you can”,  the rest of the girls brought what they could for the Pot Luck, maybe the last one.

Oh, and Tracy brought guns.

There was a knock, no, a pound at the door.

Everyone was glad Tracy was there.



9 responses to “Last Pot Luck (144 word story)”

  1. Tracii Guns anyone? Or is it just me? Anyhow this was very unique clever and into read.

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    1. Sorry Violet no intent on a Tracii Guns reference there hehehe. But thank you, glad you enjoyed the read!

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  2. Wow, that was ominous! Great prose!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  3. Thanks Yvette!! Much appreciate the compliment!!

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  4. Let it be said that someone needs to bring guns to a pot luck fight.

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