The Crow & The Winter Witch (poem)

So at dVerse Poets this week Kim had an eye check-up for a new prescription and part of the check-up was to read from laminated test cards of different size fonts in sentences and below each of the sentences were sets of four words. She thought these sets of four words would make a cool poetics prompt.

And, thus, said prompt from Kim? To choose one or two sets of words and write a poem using them in the order in which they appear. There was a bit more possible to the prompt but I was good … thanks Kim.

Here are the sets of words:

(I chose the sets in bold)

nose – one – cause – even
were – crone – our – summer
name – use – means – arose
near – can – remove – sure
crow – verse – see – renew
assume – once- van – sum
aware – caves – sea – cream

The Crow & The Winter Witch

The crow walks as if his smart, stone counting, building stick were cigar

like Groucho

or cane for crone who invites him for company’s perch and old silly movies

in cold months

and caws crow joke verse for friends to hear

and see

in funny slide skip dance steps

on out warm window sills

that make old lonely

fairy tale’d spoke

bent magic’d women

laugh

and friends cackle

in wing’d giggle gaggle

flitting

fits away

while he lingers her equally bent house

in the winter wood

“our bent house”

he thinks

to while away until

Spring

then Summer

renew

her time to wait on lost children

in the wood

for new Grimm tales be writ  



14 responses to “The Crow & The Winter Witch (poem)”

  1. I enjoyed your take on Grimm’s fairy tales, Stephen, especially as it has a crow and a winter witch. I love the description of the Groucho-like crow’s walk, and the idea of the crow and the crone watching ‘old silly movies in cold months’. The ‘funny slide skip dance steps’ on warm window sills made me laugh like a ‘bent magic’d’ woman.

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    1. Thanks so much Kim!! Glad ya enjoyed and thanks for the really cool and inventive prompt!!

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      1. You’re welcome, Stephen.

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      2. Clever, original, lovely semantics and great narrative..enjoyed this!

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  2. I would definitely like to befriend your crow, though mind you I am no crone!
    This is delightful, Stephen.

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    1. HeHeHe!! No, you are no crone!!! 🙂 🙂

      But he does seem a fella worthy of befriending huh?

      Thanks P!!

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      1. Haha!
        He sure does.
        My pleasure. 😊

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  3. Love the way you describe the crow… I feel it is this season’s fowl.

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  4. Crow-lovin’, fanciful, merry, and folk-tale-ishly good!

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    1. Ahhhhhh much appreciated Dora, love that description!!! “… folk-tale-ishly good!”

      Thanks!!

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  5. Of course, now I’m seeing Groucho everywhere. I love the levels of this.

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