Maybe This Christmas (poem)

A prompt from Dora at dVerse Poets to write a poem, with a holiday tint, using “Despite” and “Still” and so many well worked and wondrous examples of Dora’s inspiration and intent.

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Maybe this Christmas

Maybe this Christmas will find

what was left behind

(in one small sock lost back under tree in a crack in the floor

found

maybe by new)

the glee of lights I knew could be seen

above all

on high

as there were none in the whole wide world of our street

that could meet

expectations or faces of Christmas like we

.

Maybe

just maybe

newer new will find what was left behind

(remodel make old undone amid dust and splinters and curses

of hammered thumbs

that one

now graying sock

fallen through crack)

a gift from Mom’s and Dad’s of memories back

that held promise

of lights they knew could be seen

in child’s dreams

at Christmas

above all

despite

whole wide world’s changed street

through thick dark clouds

now

expectations tougher reach

.

Maybe

season’s redemptive thought

maybe

newest new will find that once lost behind

(after tear down that faded sock of gifted wonder in rubble

of rebuild

could

maybe

be found

still

full of sparkling memories dusted, cleaned, fancy new)

finally

with chocolates and giggles and little games with hue

of wonder

after so many years

to maybe

just maybe

gift to the latest new

of expectations

anew

seen above all others in this whole wide world’s now angry street

maybe

just maybe this Christmas



12 responses to “Maybe This Christmas (poem)”

  1. The thought of those forgotten Christmas gifts me reminds me of my Mother who sometimes bought gifts that she forgot to give and found years later…

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    1. Yes, had a few of those as well. 🙂

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  2. I really enjoyed your take on the prompt, the thought that something of a previous Christmas was left behind, an interesting metaphor for memories of Christmas past.

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  3. Thank ya so much Kim! Maybe to find some child-like magic again? Now, that would be a thing huh? 🙂

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  4. How I love this, Stephen! Three stanzas of Christmas wish, amidst angry, changed streets, and diminished expectations of “the world of our street.” I love the structural progressions, the quirky, almost child-like diction and rhetorical repetitions that concentrate the wistful tone, the imagery of Christmas gifts and treasures of the past found and enjoyed in their still-newness. This poem hangs like a star on a Christmas tree, full of hope for an elusive joy. A genuine pleasure to read. 🙌🎄🌟

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  5. Why thanks so much, way too effusive in your praise … oh, but please go on. HeHeHe!!

    No thank you so much, your wonderful response is very much appreciated and thank you for the prompt!! Happy Holidays Dora!!

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  6. What a delightful write, Stephen! Maybe this Christmas it will be found.

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    1. Now wouldn’t that be nice? Thank ya P!!!

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  7. enjoyed readingbyour Maybe.

    thanks for dropping by my blog

    HAPPY HOLIDAYS

    Much❤️💚love

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  8. Ahhhh, thank you so much Gillena!!

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  9. […] years past and their really cute Steve, Beck and Nick times, just with cats and houses shared to new other poem responses to prompts from new friends to that unexpectantly at, third year reminders of Christmas cat songs, to even […]

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