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These Bangs (poem)

A new Quadrille poem prompt at dVerse Poets to begin the week.

A 44 word dVerse poem that, this time around, asks to include the word “Bang”.

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These Bangs

Big ones that begat this life

to

smaller ones

softly floating wispy cloth plush petite over imploring eyes that begat beauty

on mountains I sounded song

from peaks   

I louded

bangs

until this

another

faded in bangless valley’s whimper

but lingering echo

these bangs

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7 responses to “These Bangs (poem)”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    and what’s beneath the bangs is the most important.

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  2. Stephen J Frankenberry Avatar
    Stephen J Frankenberry

    That is true.

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  3. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    “I louded bangs” Now that is very original phrasing!

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    1. Stephen J Frankenberry Avatar
      Stephen J Frankenberry

      Thank you for picking that out P!

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  4. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    what a lovely line, this:

    on mountains I sounded song

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    1. Stephen J Frankenberry Avatar
      Stephen J Frankenberry

      Oh, thanks so much my friend!!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You are welcome. Truly a gem.

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