Don’t Pinch Me (poem)

So I came about this cool site, dVersepoets.com, of poets who gather together at this online Poet’s Pub to enjoy some fine food (especially the desserts it seems) some drink and the good company of other writers sharing words around tables or from atop barstools.

Well, the first word prompt in my new discovery here is “Pinch” and it comes with these instructions:

Greetings, poetical powerhouses! De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) here, happy to be presenting today’s Quadrille – that tiny poem of just 44 words (including one word we provide) that packs a powerful punch

Today, I’d like you to cinch your wee poem together using some form of the word pinch.

You can use it as a noun, verb, or adjective. Let your piece rhyme sublime, or sprinkle in a pinch of prose. Just be sure your poem has a total of 44 words (not including the title), and some literal form of the word pinch is included. 

So, prompt taken then.

Definitely save me a seat in the future by the way.

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Don’t Pinch Me

Don’t pinch me to ask me of dreams

The ones we don’t wish to disturb

The ones of colors and stories and peoples vibrant

So

That you squint and laugh away reality’s wake

Don’t pinch me to tell me that I’m dreaming

I’m good



22 responses to “Don’t Pinch Me (poem)”

  1. That’s great! Will have to check out that site as well!

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  2. Welcome to dVerse! So glad you came our way, and found some inspiration in this week’s Quadrille prompt!

    What a perfect start you’ve sparked! I now want to “squint and laugh away reality’s wake.” Thanks for drawing us into the dream.

    Hope you’ll come back for more!

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    1. Welcome to our poetry pub! I enjoyed where the inspiration took you with ”
      colors and stories and peoples vibrant”.
      Thank you for your kind words and for stumbling upon our virtual community.

      ~Mish

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  3. And thank ya for the welcome and the read!! I will definitely be back for more, thanks!!!

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    1. Always fun to see a new face, Stephen. We look forward to reading more of your work!

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  4. Good, keep on dreaming. So nice to meet you! Welcome to dVerse.

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  5. this is delightful!! and dreamy 🙂
    My post is here

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  6. Oh, thanks so much Vidya. I will take a delightful and a dreamy any day!! 🙂

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  7. A fantastic dreamscape, ready to “squint and laugh away reality’s wake” (love that line!) Welcome to the the dVerse poets pub! Glad you found us. 😊

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  8. Your dreams, the opposite my nightmares.🌗

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  9. Well, to dreams instead then.

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  10. Not pinching you for sure! Dream on.
    So nice you dropped by dVerse pub.

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    1. HeHe, indeed!! Glad I found you all!!

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  11. […] This I did and it is the most recent post in the Attic here (just below), “Don’t Pinch Me”. […]

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  12. Welcome to the dVerse pub!
    To such dreams!

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  13. Yes, to such dreams!!! Thanks for the welcome!

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  14. hi, Stephen—welcome.
    I say, stay as you are and keep dreaming.
    so glad I read this. Blessings. Xo

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  15. […] This I did and it is the most recent post in the Attic here, “Don’t Pinch Me”. […]

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