Digging to China (poem)

A Quadrille prompt this week at dVerse Poets, “Let’s get digging”, comes from Punam who asks that we use the word “dig” or some form of it or the D – I – G in other words (like digital for example) in the Quadrille, which is a 44 word dVerse Poets poem, not including the title, that includes a prompted word.

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Digging to China

Tried digging to China

see if I would emerge upside down

become different,

new

.

I dug

past waiting worms

bones of my undead ghosts

a rusted lunch box rattling with childhood

foundations on foundations

a Chinese man digging the other way

.

We nodded,

understood



12 responses to “Digging to China (poem)”

  1. Nicely written. Loved the climax in the last two lines where you found your Chinese doppelganger!

    By the way, I write poems and scribble about life’s quiet truths. Do check out my blog and subscribe if you like it.

    Keep writing!

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    1. Thank you Barnadhya, much appreciated!! And I will do on both fronts by the way, head to you blog space and continue writing. 🙂

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      1. Glad to know that, Stephen! 😀

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  2. Haha! I guess he had the same idea. We could all do with more understanding between peeps these days.

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    1. Yes we could Dora, thank ya!!

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  3. That was awesome, Stephen! Loved the last two lines!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Ahhh, thanks Yvette, I really appreciate that!!

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  4. Ain’t that the truth, we’re not so strange or removed, wonderful poem Stephen.

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    1. Thank so much Paul and no we’re not so far removed at all. Sometimes there’s just change, feeling a need of such, and one man’s boring normal might just be another man’s change.

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      1. Absolutely so Stephen ❤️

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  5. Lol! Both of you were on the same page…er…tunnel! Keep digging. 😉

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    1. Indeed! 🙂 Thanks Punam!!

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