Are All Accounted For In the Moon? (into dream) – (poem)

So returning to the art of Catrin Welz-Stein in a latest prompt at dVerse Poets, four paintings to choose from and then write away as you will on one or more.

Are All Accounted For In the Moon? (to dream)

The Captain called us all aboard at eyes shut wide

Déjà vu?

aboard captain, again

again

Ennui?

here Sir, ready to break free

Regret?

here (sigh)

you’re late

sorry Sir

Amalgam of youth?

(in unison) on deck

from where tonight?

(in unison in unison) a toss of year(s) Sir

Fear? … Oh, stop … we’re just flying into dream

but …?

You can run, you can stall, you can trip, you can fall

quiet

from heavens through clouds

or from small atolls

aloud …  

… but it’s always too real for us all

you’ll still wake, I’ll almost promise you daylight’ll still call

Anger? No, I know you’re aboard

!!!!!

Artists in color?

ready to paint vibrant Sir

Artists in black and white?

ready to paint an absence

Singers?

just off key Sir, enough

Joy? You still in with this company?

always Sir,

happy self sycophancy

.

The moon was more than willing to be yoked as an ox

or reined as a braided guilded horse

or bridled an ass

or even boated a hung foolish ship

but tethered on deck still

of

all willing slaves of sleeping adventure, rowing

rowing

a ship of nonsense,

or import

all equal for transport,

all equal

to what might come

tonight on light seas, nay, oceans of drama dream

discovery …

.

The Captain called us all aboard at eyes wide shut

again

Déjà vu? Is that you?

it is Sir

again



33 responses to “Are All Accounted For In the Moon? (into dream) – (poem)”

  1. Frankenberry, this reads like a Gilbert & Sullivan musical had a baby with Terry Gilliam’s Time Bandits. Surrealistic, entertaining, and most of all funny as hell. Thanks for joining in and painting a lovely patina on that image.

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    1. Well thanks so much!!! Gilbert & Sullivan AND Terry Gilliam? Waaay too high praise but so appreciate that take, unexpected and more than welcome for it! Thank you again!! 🙂

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    scotthastiepoet

    Engaging and very original write, very nicely rounded off too. Lots to enjoy here – thanks for sharing…

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    1. So glad you enjoyed Scott!! Thanks! And thank you for noticing the “rounding off” as I wanted to bring it back to begin again.

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    Ordinary Person

    This is absolutely brilliant! I love how you’ve taken concepts and abstractions and made them characters in a weird, surreal drama of sorts. Bravo!

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    1. Ahhhh Jeez dude, thanks so much!! Too kind!!

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  4. I’d say the artist would be delighted by your poem!

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    1. Now wouldn’t that be a “thing”. Thanks Debi!

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  5. Bravo. Nice write. I also went back to that post to write my poem.

    much♡love

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  6. Thanks so much Gillena, and I have never gotten a “Bravo” by the way! I’m good with a “Bravo” Thank you!

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  7. What a tribute to the artist, Steve, that her work spurred such a witty journey of the imagination!

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    1. Thank you Dora and a noting of possibly being witty? Can’t go wrong with that!

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  8. I so enjoyed this! A brilliant write.

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    1. Wow, thank you so much!! Much appreciated P!!!

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      1. You are very welcome. 😊

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  9. Excellent! These are my favorite parts:

    “… you’ll still wake, I’ll almost promise you daylight’ll still call”

    “Artists in color?

    ready to paint vibrant sir

    Artists in black and white?

    ready to paint an absence

    Singers?”

    Sometimes I dream in black and white, or cartoons. Come to think of it, the cartoons are when I dream in black and white. The mind is a beautiful thing.

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  10. Thank you Melissa!! And for taking extra time too! And black and white cartoons huh? Interesting. 🙂 🙂

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  11. Got transported afar… on the boat & in the sea

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    1. Glad to have offered the transport Anita. Thanks!

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  12. Wow, that was a ride! I love the choice of image as inspiration and these lines stood out for me…”all equal / to what might come / tonight on light seas, nay, oceans of drama dream / discovery”

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  13. Thank ya Mish, this one became a fave of mine the moment I was finished with it.

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  14. Love the journey you took us in… including the singing out of tune

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    1. Thanks Bjorn! Yeah, off key tunes are definitely a hallmark of dreams. At least mine anyway.

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  15. I love the art of Catrin Welz-Stein, Stephen, and really enjoyed your surreal ekphrastic poem. I especially like the idea of the moon as a dream-space-ship, and the phrase ‘at eyes shut wide’.

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    1. Ahhhh, many thanks Kim and I love her art as well!! So glad you enjoyed!! 🙂

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      1. My pleasure, Stephen.

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  16. This is absolutely stellar writing! I too love the artwork by Catrin Welz-Stein 😍

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    1. Now that is very kind Sanaa, thank you so much!! I really loved the ride this one took me on.

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      1. You’re most welcome 😊

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  17. Thank you for the adventure Stephen, but also those little reminders of character and personality tucked away in plain sight 🙂 I especially loved “happy self sycophancy”

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    1. Thanks so much Paul!! So happy you enjoyed the ride my friend!!

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